Email Service Notes (Celeste)

Writing exercise

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J: I want our baby to grow up in Shanghai.
M: No way. As I’m the mother, I win. Let’s live in Beijing after I give birth to our baby.
J: I think it better to live in a city where the air is cleaner.
M:I am sending you the statistics data of China’s air situation, please check it out. Shanghai is not that good either.
J: I don’t want to work with people who are too good at political topics. You know me. I do things, not talk things.
M:Who told you that Beijingnese always shoot the breeze without taking actions? Don’t forget that your wife is a Beijingnese.
J:You are different. My Beijing colleagues tend to drop the ball in 8 out 10 of our projects.
M: Those 2 guys can’t represent Beijingnese. Don’t over think it.
J:My phone has really bad reception here. What did you say?
M: Well, nothing. I’ll talk to you later when you are back home. Bye.
J: Bye.

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J: I want our baby to grow up in Shanghai.
M: No way. Since I’m the mother, I win. Let’s live in Beijing after I give birth.
J: I think it better to live in a city where the air is cleaner.
M:I am sending you the statistics data of China’s air situation, please check it out. Shanghai is not that much better either.
J: I don’t want to work with people who are too good at talking politics/political topics. You know me. I do things, not talk about things.
M:Who told you that Beijingnese always shoot the breeze without taking actions? Don’t forget that me, your wife, is Beijingnese.
J:You are different. My Beijing colleagues tend to drop the ball in 8 out 10 of our projects.
M: Those 2 guys don’t represent Beijingnese. Don’t over think it.
J:My phone has really bad reception here. What did you say?
M: Well, nothing. I’ll talk to you later when you are back home. Bye.
J: Bye.