Email Service Notes (Celeste)

Writing exercise

(Ringing)
– Hello?
– Hello. This is Vicky speaking. How are you Yolanda. Are you getting better?
– HI, Vicky. I’m good. I’m getting getter. Thank you. How’s everything going in the company?
– We have a new kid on the block.
– What? In our department?
– Yes.
– To replace me?
– No, don’t panic. He’s a Product Manager for one of our newly launched product.
– Ok. I am wondering if our boss, Henry, likes him?
– ……..
– ……
– Sorry. The call dropped. Henry saw his hand writing, you know, like chicken scratch. I guess he doesn’t like that. What do you think?
– What did you say? Could you please repeat that?
– I said his hand writing seemed like chicken scratch and Henry saw it.
– Oh, strict Henry doesn’t like it. I guess I should go to work tomorrow.
– Hold your horses, you should stay longer at home since you had managed broken your arm.

Edited 

(Ringing)
– Hello?
Hello, Yolanda. This is Vicky speaking. How are you? Are you getting better?
– HI, Vicky. I’m good. I’m getting getter. Thank you. How’s everything going in the company?
– We have a newcomer/newbie/new kid on the block.
– What? In our department?
– Yes.
– To replace me?
– No, don’t panic. He’s a product manager for one of our newly launched products.
– Ok. I am wondering if our boss, Henry, likes him.
– ……..
– ……
– Sorry. The call dropped. Henry saw his hand writing, you know, it was like chicken scratch. I guess he doesn’t like that. What do you think?
– What did you say? Could you please repeat that?
– I said his hand writing seemed like chicken scratch and Henry saw it.
– Oh, Strict Henry doesn’t like that. I guess I should go to work tomorrow.
– Hold your horses / Don’t jump the gun, you should stay/rest longer at home since your arm is broken.