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Dear Professor James Cook,

Very warmly welcome for your coming!
I am a student union president of our art academy, named Liming. I will recommend you some tourists in Shanghai, including in The bund、the Yu garden and Songjiang film and television park. The highlight points are as following:

First of all, the bund, where is diversified tourists, you can see many different country’s style buildings facing the HuangPu river and there are a big platform that you can go sightseeing around that. Next one is the Yu garden, where collected many Chinese traditional handicrafts stores. The last one is Songjiang film and television park, where is a place produced lots of TV series.

Hope you will enjoy the time in chain. Moreover, we are looking forward you classes.
Liming.

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Dear Professor James Cook,

We are so happy to welcome you here to Shanghai!
My name is Liming and I am the student union president of our art academy. I highly recommend that you should visit these popular Shanghai spots including the Bund, Yu Garden and Songjiang Film and Television Park.

First of all, the Bund attracts tourists from all over the world because you can walk on the big sidewalk along the HuangPu River and see many styles of architecture.
Next, Yu Garden is more traditional as it has many shops selling traditional Chinese crafts.
The last, Songjiang Film and Television Park, is cool because this is where lots of TV series were produced.

I hope you will enjoy your time here in Shanghai. Moreover, we are looking forward to your classes,
Liming