Email Service Notes (Celeste)

Writing exercise

Thumbs up
– Hi, Marry,
– Hi, Jack. What a coincidence!
– Yeah. Where are you off to?
– Power lunch. You?
– Just walking around. Are you still working in Apple?
– Yes.
– Do you still live in Changshu Rd.?
– Yes.
– Do you mind if I stop by your place sometime?
– All right, look. Let me get this straight, I have a boyfriend now.
– I know you don’t. You are playing hardball. I can’t stand living without you. I’ll have a job interview this afternoon. Don’t worry any more. I will have a job. I’m working on it.
– Thumbs up, but I’m sorry, I do have a boyfriend now

Edited 

Thumbs up
– Hi, Marry,
– Hi, Jack. What a coincidence!
– Yeah. Where are you off to?
– Power lunch. You?
– Just walking around. Are you still working for/at Apple?
– Yes.
– Do you still live on Changshu Rd.?
– Yes.
– Do you mind if I stop by your place sometime?
– All right, listen/look. Let me make this clear/this straight, I have a boyfriend now.
– I know you don’t. You are playing hardball. I can’t stand living without you. I have a job interview this afternoon. Don’t worry any more. I will have a job. I’m working on it.
– [Thumbs up] Cool, but I’m sorry, I do have a boyfriend now.
***thumbs up is body language, we never really say it