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Last night when I finished my English class and on my way to home. I found a cat near the corner and with the pattern that I favorite. The cat has gray fur on back and the belly is white, and I figure out it is around half year old, and it’s forehead is gray and around the mouth is white, so it looks very cute. I called “Miao” and it responded, and it saw me in a strange eyes, then I saw it awhile and moved on.

I really want to fed a cat but when I thought I have a lot of business trips , so I think I don’t have ability to fed a cat. I think if I fed a cat I should have the duty to take good care of it, and if I can’t do that I’m better not to fed one now.

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Last night when I finished my English class on my way to home
Last night on my way home from English class, I found a cat near the corner with the pattern that is my favorite. The cat has gray fur on its back and its belly is white, and I figure it is around half a year old, and its forehead is gray and around its mouth is white, so it looks very cute. I called out “miao” and it responded, and it looked at me with strange eyes, then I watched it for awhile and moved on.

I really want to have a cat but when I thought that I have a lot of business trips, I realized I don’t have the ability to take care of a cat. I think if I have a cat I should take good care of it, and if I can’t do that, it’s better not to have one now.