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I am planing a travel in August. My brother and sister will go with me together.

The destination is Okinawa, an island of Japan, it has beautiful sea and exotic life style if compare to the other conventional Japanese locations. Also, if I go to Okinawa, and provide required incomes documents, I can get the multipleï¼entry visa of Japan, which is valid for 3 years.

We are all excited to this travel. We have booked flights and hotels, which is very popular and the price is getting higher.

When I booked flights via an agent, I made a mistake that I filled in wrong passport for my brother. It was terrible because there is a rule if the flight is firm, the information of passenger cannot be changed. Whatever, at that moment, I called the agent, and explained the trouble I had, I told them I understand the rule but I need to change the information, I can pay additional fee about it. Fortunately, the agent helped me call the flight company and change the information in the end without any additional fee.

It’s lucky I think.

Now, we are searching some traveling advices of Okinawa, such as the view spots, foods, traffic, and shopping.

I am looking forward to this travel, I need a vacation to free myself, or find my ego.

Edited 

I am planning on traveling in August. / I am planning a trip/vacation in August. My brother and sister will go/come with me.

The/Our destination is Okinawa, an island of Japan which is surrounded by a/the beautiful sea and a tropical/an exotic life style if/when compared to the other conventional Japanese locations/destinations/areas/cities. Also, if I go to Okinawa and provide required income documents, I can get a multiple entry Japanese visa which is valid for 3 years.

We are all excited for this trip/vacation/adventure/journey. We have booked flights and hotels, which are very popular and the prices are getting higher.

When I booked flights via an agent, I made a mistake where I entered/gave the wrong passport number for my brother. It was terrible because there is a rule that if the flight is booked/full, the  passenger’s information cannot be changed. At that moment, I called the agent and explained my mistake. I told them I understand the rule but I need to change the information and I can pay an additional fee for it. Fortunately, the agent helped me call the flight company and changed the information in the end without any additional fees.

I’m lucky, I think.  / I think I’m lucky.

Now, we are searching for some traveling tips/suggestions/ travel guides (books) about Okinawa, such as the views, foods, traffic, and shopping.

I am looking forward to this trip, I need a vacation to free myself, or find my ego.***What does this mean?