Email Service Notes (Celeste)

Writing exercise

Please ignore the one I submitted 5 mins ago. Sorry for any inconvenience caused.

It works for me
A video clip of my ex-girlfriend dancing with me on my smart phone turned into a disaster.
Do you mean Jenny saw it?
Yes, she turned really angry. I even heard her cry and our relationship has been on the rocks ever since. I should have erased it earlier.
Don’t worry. Buy her flowers and tell her jokes, she’ll be fine soon.
That’s it?
Yes,it works for me.

Edited 

Please ignore the one I submitted 5 mins ago. Sorry for any inconvenience!

It works for me
A video clip of my ex-girlfriend dancing with me on my smart phone turned into a disaster.

OR

A video clip on my smart phone of my ex-girlfriend dancing with me turned into a disaster.
Do you mean Jenny saw it?
Yes, she was infuriated/pissed off/enraged/ turned really angry. I even heard her cry and our relationship has been on the rocks ever since. I should have deleted/erased it earlier.
Don’t worry. Buy her flowers and tell her jokes, she’ll get over it / she’ll forget all about it/ she’ll be fine soon.
That’s it?
Yes, it works for me.