Email Service Notes (Celeste)

Writing exercise

What is the most dangerous thing in your home? How can your home be made less dangerous?

There are many dangerous things at home, like gas, fire, big machines, which all can lead fatal accident. But I think the most dangerous thing is fire at home. Fire can destroy a home, burn it into a ruin. People who stuck in a room can be killed when fire happened. What’s more, sometimes you can’t tell out what caused a fire. It can be cigarette ends, candles, and it also can be electrical accidents and plug problems, and so on. Fire is not easy to control and to be put out once it begins. So, I think fire is really very dangerous.

Basically, people should be careful when using fire, keep fire away from things which are easy to be on fire, turn off the electric buttons when leaving, etc. And one more important measure is to keep a fire extinguisher at home.

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What is the most dangerous thing in your home? How can your home be made less dangerous?

There are many dangerous things at home, like gas, fire, big machines, which all can lead to fatal accidents. But I think the most dangerous thing at home is fire. Fire can destroy a home, burn it down to the ground/ Fire can leave a home in ruins. People who are trapped/stuck in a room can be killed if there is a fire. What’s more, sometimes you can’t figure out what caused a fire. It could be cigarette butts, candles, and it could also be electrical accidents and plug problems, and so on. Fire is not easy to control and put out once it ignites/starts/begins. So, I think fire is really very dangerous.

Basically, people should be careful when using fire, keep fire away from things which are flammable/easy to catch on fire, turn off the electric buttons***What is this? when leaving, etc. And one more important measure is to keep a fire extinguisher at home.