Email Service Notes (Celeste)

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A lot of people are saying
– How’s it going ?
– Not much. hmmm, I’m on diet.
– Interesting. Wendy and Johnson told me they were on diet too. So “weight management” is catching on.
– Right. You catch on quick. The Summer is coming.
– Have you lost any weight?
– Of course. I’ve lost 2.5 kilogram since last Monday.
– Bravo. Wait, no,no,no. Do you mean it? It’s too much! Make sure that you lost weight, now your mind.
– I have to, because Peter will come back to Shanghai next Month.
– Peter? Your ex-boyfriend, Peter? Come on! I thought you had drifted apart.
– We have, but he messed me up. I just wanna show him a different me and make him feel sorry.
– You freak me out. I thought you were managing your weight for yourself, it turned out you suck.
– A lot of people are saying guys don’t like big girls like me.
– You’ll be “too much” for some people. Too loud, too soft, too this, too that. But you’ll always be perfect for the people who need you, who care about you. Hang out with me tonight, forget about the whole losing weight thing, let him go!

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A lot of people are saying
– How’s it going ?
– Not much. hmmm, I’m on diet.
– Interesting. Wendy and Johnson told me they were on a diet/diets too. So “weight management” is catching on.
– Right. You catch on quick. Summer is coming.
– Have you lost any weight?
– Of course. I’ve lost 2.5 kilograms since last Monday.
– Bravo. Wait, no,no,no. Are you serious? That’s too much and too fast! Make sure that you lose weight, not your mind.
– I have to, because Peter will come back to Shanghai next month.
– Peter? Your ex-boyfriend, Peter? Come on! I thought you had drifted apart.
– We have, but he messed me up. I just wanna show him a different me and make him feel sorry.
– You freak me out. I thought you were managing your weight for yourself,  you suck.
– A lot of people are saying guys don’t like big girls like me.
– You’ll be “too much” for some people. Too loud, too soft, too this, too that. But you’ll always be perfect for the people who need you, who care about you. Hang out with me tonight, forget about the whole losing weight thing, forget him!