Email Service Notes (Celeste)

Writing exercise

my favorite season

Summer is my favorite season

The first reason is I don’t need to put on a lot of clothes, which make me feel free. Also, I don’t need to worry about selecting clothes, just one T-shirt is enough.

Secondly, I like the feeling of sweeping. I can feel the heat from ground, which makes me feel the vigorous of the whole world.

Furthermore, summer is a season for eating. It is the season of watermelon, my favorite fruit, and I can eat barbecue with my friends outdoor, which also make me fulfilled.

Last, summer is the season when I met my wife and married with her. There are too much wonderful memories in the season.

I love it.

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my favorite season

Summer is my favorite season.

The first reason is I don’t need to put on a lot of clothes, which makes me feel free. Also, I don’t need to worry about selecting/picking out clothes, just one T-shirt is enough.

Secondly, I like the feeling of sweeping***what does this mean?. I can feel the heat from the ground, which makes me feel the vigor of the whole world / feel the vigorous world.

Furthermore, summer is a season for eating. It is the season of watermelon, my favorite fruit, and I can eat barbecue with my friends outdoors, which also makes me fulfilled.

Last, summer is the season when I met my wife and married her. There are too many wonderful memories in this season.

I love it.