Email Service Notes (Celeste)***

Hi Zora – I am trying to edit your email but it is too hard to understand. In your next F2F class I think we should discuss this. I hope you understand. – Thank you! Celeste

Writing exercise

I used to be a advertising execution in our company. When I got a execution brief of the coming campaign, I always said “There are many things to think about it, what did plannings do, they do nothing.””what? They want to change the media again which the ads were on air? Why they didn’t talked with clients before they make a decision? It’s too hard to communicate with TV station. oh~ the spots on the drama channel can’t be booked.”and so on sentences.

But when I came to be a planning, I think I am wrong. Every position have it’s own function. The execution is the most simple work in the advertising agency. Because there is someone had did good matting in every process, you just follow up the next project going. I am so stupid!

Edited 

I used to be an advertising executive in our company. When I got a execution brief***What is this? Do you mean executive brief? of the coming campaign, I always said “There are many things to think about, what did planning do, they do nothing.” “what? They want to change the media again which the ads were on air? Why they didn’t talked with clients before they made a decision? It’s too hard to communicate with TV station. oh~ the spots on the drama channel can’t be booked.”and so on sentences.

But when I came to be a planning, I think I am wrong. Every position has it’s own function. The execution is the most simple work in the advertising agency. Because there is someone had did good matting in every process, you just follow up the next project going. I am so stupid!