Email Service Notes 3rd March (Raph)

Writing exercise

Original:

Just a to do list for myself now,maybe these items will be our topics next class.
My 2017 Goal:
1. Get promotion of Account Manager,at the same time move to a new work environment
2. Travel to a sea Island for relaxing at the first half of the year
3. Travel to East Europe at the second half of the year
4. Treat myself with a nice hand bag
5. Buy a pair of sports shoes and a pair of Valentino
6. Read 10 books
7. Have an excursion with my parents
8. Finish using a note book.
9. Write 3 pieces of Film critics
10. Write 10 pieces of articles for my Wechat official account
11. Recuperate the health in good condition
12. Recover the bone hurt and do sports at the end of the year
13. House sweeping twice a year
14. Make my face skin looks good
15. Drive a car myself.
16. Replace my old ID card and passport to new ones
17. Buy a present for my mother
18. Buy some clothes for my grand parents
19. Beauty my hand nails three times
20. No ice-cream this year
21. Study English well
22. Learn a new skill
23. Launch or develop my own business
24. Have a new hair style
25. Buy a new little thumb’s ring
26. Some appointments with my former classmates
27. Prepare the gifts for my best friends

Edited:

Here is a  to do list for myself. Maybe these items will be our topic next class.

My 2017 Goals:
1. Get promoted to Account Manager,and move to a new work environment;
2. Travel to an island to relax during the first half of the year;
3. Travel to East Europe during the second half of the year;
4. Treat myself with a nice hand bag;
5. Buy a pair of sneakers and a pair of Valentino shoes;
6. Read 10 books;
7. Have an excursion with my parents;
8. Finish using a notebook;
9. Write 3 film critics;
10. Write 10 articles for my WeChat official account;
11. Regain my health in good condition;
12. Recover from my bone pain and go back to doing sports by the end of the year;
13. Do a major cleaning of the house, twice a year;
14. Take care of my face in order to make my skin look good;
15. Learn how to drive;
16. Replace my old ID card and passport with new ones;
17. Buy a present for my mother;
18. Buy some clothes for my grandparents;
19. Get a manicure three times;
20. Quit eating ice-cream for the entire year;
21. Study English;
22. Learn a new skill;
23. Start my own business;
24. Get a new hair style
25. Buy a new pinky ring
26. Get together with my former classmates
27. Buy gifts for my best friends