Demo Class Notes (Louisa – Nicholas)

Email Writing Template

Original

I think I prefer to work with the male boss because they can give us some like IT information, and when I worked in IBM a lot of people is male so I have a lot of chance to work with the male boss. The female boss I touch them in the project, she is a project leader / manager and we work together. I like because she can give some another help that is different to male boss.

Corrected

I think I prefer to work with male bosses because they can give us some like IT information / they’re very familiar with the tech space , and when I worked in IBM a lot of people were male so I had a lot / lots of chances / opportunities to work with / to work alongside / to collaborate with male bosses I encountered / worked with  female bosses during a project, she was a project leader / manager and we worked together. I liked the way that she could provide some different help / [guidance]  that is different from my male bosses.

Vocabulary

how long have you been a working professional
how long have you been working
how many years have you been in your career

one times in a week / once a week / once weekly

Grammar

example for we need to work with Amazon
for example we often work with Amazon

involved + in
involved + with
I need involve this project 
I need to be involved in this project

is a new way online shopping
is a new way to shop online
is a new form of online shopping

we love to shopping online
we love shopping online
we love to shop online

verb 1 + to + verb 2
verb 1 + verb 2 + ing

I can’t describe the buy some things which is for me
I can’t describe the things that I buy for myself versus the things I buy for my kid