Demo Class Notes (Alice F – Lily)

Pronunciation

v w : we like warmer weather
oo: he is a good looking cook. He likes to read books.

My name is ZhaoYunFeng, I’m a designer, I have a brother and a sister. My sister is an English teacher too, but she teaches middle school students. I like writing. I’m a good cook because I like eat, it make me feel good. I’ve been working out since last year, my company is in a bad mood, so I don’t like my office. My boss is very service. So in office, no one there to speak. On one hand, we have many free time. I have a good friend, so it’s good. It’s boring overtime, so for money. It’s nearly to my home.

I like eat at home, I like do it myself. I like traveling, I’ve been to Korea with my friends, and been to XM, NJ. I like XM because it has sea. The weather is summer. I come from HeNan, the weather is cold, so I like warmer place.

Revised

My name is ZhaoYunFeng, I’m a designer, I have a brother and a sister. My sister is an English teacher too, but she teaches middle school students. I like reading. I’m a good cook because I like to eat, it makes me feel good. I’ve been working out since last year. My company has a bad/unhappy/boring/dead atmosphere/vibe , so I don’t like my office. My boss is very serious/strict, so in office, no one dares to speak in the office. On one hand, we have a lot of free time. I have a good friend, so it’s good. It’s a boring job, but I do it for the money. It’s close by to where I live/ It’s near my house.

I like to eat at home, I like to cook by myself. I like traveling, I’ve been to Korea with my friends, and I have been to XM, NJ. I like XM because it‘s near the sea. The weather in XM is warm. I come from HeNan, the weather is cold, so I like warmer places.