Demo Class Notes (Ellie – Nicholas)

Vocabulary

demanding / high-pressure / stressful – 要求 – 压力

e.g. The job at Honeywell is not too demanding / stressful.

lifestyle – the way you live your life or how you balance your life

e.g. A healthy lifestyle is more important than an unhealthy lifestyle that earns you money!

Grammar

how make my family happy / how to make my family happy

we are all person / we are all people

Original 

Maybe men – because – actually I don’t thin the world the whole world is very safety – so if a man go outside he could be more – could be safer than any women – and actually in job / work / career many jobs prefer men to woman, and I used to – last year I want to change my job and many company told me you are married but you without a child, I prefer a man.

Corrected

Maybe men – because – actually I don’t think the world the whole world is very safe – so if a man goes outside he could be more – could be safer than any woman – and actually in job / work / career many jobs prefer men to women, and I used to – last year I want to change my job and many companies told me you are married but you are without a child, so I prefer a man.

Original 

I think it’s wrong – I think everyone should work and life balance – good life will make work more efficiently and I don’t think work is everything for people, maybe they think they want to earn more money but they lost their healthy. I need money but I don’t want 996 for such money actually I think I not earn a lot but it think its enough I like my life and I think different people eager for different things the people who is in 996 I can’t judge them they are wrong, but I just think it’s no the good work / [lifestyle].

Corrected

I think it’s wrong – I think everyone should have a healthy work/life balance – if you have a good life this will make you work more efficiently and I don’t think work is everything for people, maybe they think they want to earn more money but they lost their health. I need money but I don’t want a 996 [lifestyle] for such money actually I think I don’t earn a lot but it think its enough I like my life and I think different people are eager for different things the people who live the 996 lifestyle I can’t judge them and say that they are wrong, but I just think it’s not a good  [lifestyle].