Demo Class Notes (Ellie – Georges)

Ellie

– Shanghainese, works for the government, does not use English for work or on a daily basis, and needs it for socializing and travelling. doesn’t need to improve writing, focus on speaking and listening.

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Vocabulary

Gown-  A formal dress you wear on special occasions, for women.

e.g. When I got married, I wore a Vera Wang wedding gown.

Grammar

I go to-  I went to  (past tense for stories)

Original 

I went to German last month for my friend’s wedding. On the wedding day because the bride and groom can’t seen each other before the wedding we drive the car to the church, because we are all foreign people, so we don’t know how to go there, when we driving we on the wrong road, and we want to turn right, and we talk to the car on our right, we all dressed up and the bride in his ***** and the Germans say we cant, and because of it the wedding was late by 20 min

Corrected

I went to Germany last month for my friend’s wedding. On the wedding day because the bride and groom can’t see each other before the wedding, we drove the car to the church. Because none of us were local, we didn’t know how to get there, when we were on our way, we asked the car next to us if they could move a bit to let us pass but they refused, saying that it was illegal and we would have to find another way. Even though we were all dressed and the bride was wearing her wedding gown, they still didn’t let us pass. Because of this the wedding was delayed by 20 mins. 

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