Demo Class Notes 8th June (Doris / Jesse)

Doris

– want to be more fluent / chinese teacher

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i have worked in hefei city for 5 years and that job is a secret, i cannot go abroad and when holiday is for 5 days or 7 days, to many people in places in china on holiday so i choose to stay at home. maybe im just a boring person. i don’t want to other places to see heads and cars. one place maybe more interesting about my husband. my husband hometown is a village. worldwide known place. it’s well known in the world, many many people go there for holidays and he was born there, and when i met him he brought me there for last year but i don’t think it is interesting.

i have worked in hefei city for 5 years and that job was a secret, i couldn’t go abroad in 5 days or 7 day holidays. I don’t like crowded places in china, so i chose to stay at home. maybe im just a boring person. i don’t want to go to other places to only see other people and cars. There is one place that i went to that is maybe more interesting and it is regarding my husband. my husband‘s hometown is a village which is a well-known place all over the world. Many many people go there for holidays and he was born there. When i met him he brought me there last year but i didn’t think it was interesting.

make it correct:
what time am I talking about? (verbs)
how many / which one? (nouns)
what is the most important part of this sentence? – what’s my point (subject – start)

make it more native sounding:
why did I say that? / so what? (adding details)
add logic (connect ideas / sentences with grammar)

during a holiday (which / that is 5-7 days) i don’t want to travel

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