I’m sick with the air. – The pollution is making me sick. / The air is making me sick.
Original
Last year I have been to Japanese and I was thinking my house is… I’m sick I want to practice my muscles. I climb a mountain to top. And I think is good for my health from that I time I love climbing. I have Japanese food, it’s delicious. At China, I think the fast food is not good but Japanese food is really delicious. It’s expensive. It’s my first time to Japan and I have my morning run by myself and I don’t know running road and I didn’t have a map. And it’s country so many Japanese can say little English so I speak to them by poor English. I think Japanese is gentleman. They are very private, you can’t go their room inside, no way. They don’t let you in.
Fiona’s Edit
Last year I have been to Japan and I was thinking my body is not strong. I’m sick I want to practice my muscles. I climbed a mountain to top. And I think it’s healthy / good for my health from that I time I love climbing. I had Japanese food, it’s delicious. In China, I think the fast food is not good but Japanese food is really delicious. It’s expensive. It’s my first time to Japan and I have my morning run by myself and I don’t know running road and I didn’t have a map. And it’s country so many Japanese can say a little English so I speak to them by simple English. I think many Japanese people are helpful. They are very private, you can’t go their room inside, no way. They don’t let you in.
Celeste’s Edit
Last year, I went to Japan and I was thinking my body is not strong enough. I was sick, so I wanted to exercise my muscles. So, I climbed a mountain to the top. I think it’s good for my health and since then I love climbing.
I had Japanese food, it’s delicious. In China, I think the fast food is not good but Japanese food is really delicious but it’s expensive.
It was my first time to go running by myself in Japan and I didn’t know which direction to go and I didn’t have a map. I went running in the countryside so few Japanese people could speak a little English so I spoke to them in simple English.
I think many Japanese people are helpful but they are very private. For example, you can’t go in their rooms or houses, they won’t let you in.
makes sense = understand
Does that make sense? = Do you understand?
Yes, that makes sense. = Yes, I understand.
No, that doesn’t make sense. = No, I don’t understand.
past tense = in the past
speak – simple/present
speaking – right now
spoke – past
will speak – in the future
exercise ( X – er – size ) [verb] – simple / present
exercising -right now
exercised -past
will exercise – in the future
direction ( der – ek – shin ) [noun] – way to go
eg. Which direction should I go? North, east, south, or west?
gentlemen – men
ladylike – women
polite / helpful – men and women
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