Demo Class Notes (Vittoria – Jesse)

Uncorrected / upgraded

abroad apart from china i went alone to boize, that is the capital city of idaho, …. i was feeling very cool because i took a plane from rome to LA… i went there to visit one of my dads best friends and his family… i was with this big american family, and they took me many places. im going back on rome on january.

yes i like blue because it’s the color of the sky, it’s the color of the sea, it reminds me of summer. i think that it’s not sad, color, it’s a bright color.

Corrected + upgraded

recently i bought a blue dress and when i wear that i feel really confident so i wear it very often and i like it very much and i understood that blue is my favourite color because of this, i also have many blue sweatshirts.

recently i bought / purchased / got / picked up / went shopping for a blue dress and when i wear it i feel really / super / incredibly / amazingly confident so i wear it very often and i like it very much / I’m really into it / I’m a massive fan of it so i guess / reckon that blue is my favourite color because of this / so as a result, i also have many / heaps of / tons of / lots of / plenty of blue sweatshirts.

Pronunciation

th – tongue out!

Grammar

i read lots of book – I read a lot / I’m a big reader / I read lots of books

which / that
which = adding new details
that = adding details

it / that / this
it = the thing / obvious thing
this = the thing here
that = the thing there