Demo Class Notes (Peter F – Jesse)

Recently, I traveled to america. I went to there with my family and, I went there because I want to improve my English so i attended a summer semester and it’s a boarding school and i just live in there and my English got some improvement. I played baseball and the knockout. My team won the baseball game and I lose in the knockout game. Everyone feel good.

I forgot what time did i wake up but I can remember that after i woke up my first thing to do is to fight my brother, just kind of playing. It both has good and bad. My younger brother always keep bothering me, like he always follows me. He will do everything that I do. Actually I think having a younger brother sometime is interesting and sometimes it is really annoying.

Recently, I traveled to america, and during the trip I went there with my family and, I went there because I wanted to improve my English so i attended a summer semester which was at a boarding school and i just lived / stayed there (for the whole semester), and my English got some improvement. I played baseball and a basketball knockout competition. My team won the baseball game and I lost the knockout game but everyone felt good.

I forgot what time I woke up but I can remember that after i woke up the first thing I did was had a play fight with my brother. It is both good and bad / It has both pros and cons / there are both positives and negatives. My younger brother always keeps bothering / always bothers / annoys me, like he always follows me (around). He will do everything that I do. Actually I think having a younger brother sometimes / occasionally / from time to time is interesting but sometimes it is really / extremely / incredibly / amazingly annoying.

past tense + connecting / adding ideas (conjunctions + which / who / where etc) + upgrade vocabulary (use in writing) 

Grammar

here / there / home – special places, no “to”

Vocabulary

How to remember vocabulary:

abrupt, dress, connection, algorithm

a girl scientist who wore a dress while she was writing computer algorithms and she abruptly remembered to connect the computer with her coffee machine so she could make an amazing coffee