Demo Class Notes (Apple X – Jesse)

I just traveled to BK in this April, because we have a training for leadership and i just came to BK with my colleague. So, the whole weeks we are just living in the hotel and take the course but at weekend we just went around to some place. It’s really hot and I think there traditional building is special, quite different with china. I like the food, and the most impression is we can take the ferry and the speed is quite high.

I just traveled to BK in April / this April, because we had a training about leadership and i just went to BK with my colleague. The whole week we lived in the hotel and took the course but at / on the weekend we went around to some places. It’s really hot and I think their traditional buildings are special, quite different from / to chinese buildings. I like the food, and the most impressive thing is that we can take the ferry and the speed is quite high.

I just traveled / took a trip / went on business / went on a business trip to BK in April / this April, because / since / due to the fact that / as we had a training about / on / in regards to / in relation to leadership and i just went to BK with my colleague / coworker.

nouns – which one? how many?
verbs – what time? 

we did – past – you know the time / time is important
we were doing – past – period of time
we have been doing – past – still happening now
we have done – past – time is not important

person / people

construct – build / make