Demo Class Notes (Cindy – Jesse)

Cindy

– writing is the problem, reading books is a problem too, vocabulary may need improvement.

but holiday i can go to travel. i think it is interesting that i can see more interesting things and i can buy some exciting things. i like buy some things and i like play some swings. i can buy toy insects, and i like some giraffes. I go to the Japan last year with my mum and my father for a month.

I learn some lessons. I learn English in afternoon and I play piano in morning and after lunch I play badminton with my mum in playground.

but on holidays / during holidays i went traveling. i think it was interesting because i could see more interesting things and i could buy some exciting things. i like buying some things and i like playing on some swings. i can buy toy insects, and i like some giraffes. I went to Japan last year with my mum and my father for a month.

I learned some lessons including English in the afternoon and I played piano in the morning and after lunch I played badminton with my mum in a / the playground.

but / however / although during holidays i went traveling / I took a trip / went on vacation. i think / I feel / I reckon it was interesting / exciting / fascinating because / since / as / due to the fact that….

grammar corrections + higher level vocabulary + short / long vowels 

play
plan
plane – plaaaeeeen

plan (short) + plane (long)
tam (short) + tame (long)

I like this – I am interested in / I am into / I’m a fan of 

every day has 1 morning, 1 afternoon, and 1 evening – the morning / afternoon / evening 

the – makes a word more obvious

I am Jesse = already obvious

I live in China

I like tea.
Tea is sweet.

I like tea / I like traveling
traveling is interesting

When I travel I can see many interesting things = every time
When I traveled I could see many interesting things = last time / specific time

during class I learn many things

learn – learned

go – went

play – played

verb – what time? 
noun – which one / how many?