F2F Class Notes 17th November (Ben)

a pirate 海盗

Pirates of the Caribbean

达到 reach

标准 standard, level

I want to reach this level.

I can, I will

I can speak Chinese better than you can. I make more money than you ever will.

–(past)–> I could, I would

I could speak Chinese better than you could.

Before I joined them, I could achieve little. Now, I can achieve more than I could (before I joined them)

What could you do to make your life better in your company?

I should / I could

Original text

Actually, the sales position is so busy and have big pressure at the first time. I don’t have enough free time to do anything. Just working everyday even weekends and holidays. So my relatives always grumble that for me .
When I worked at there several times ago I got some better opportunities and useful suggestion who I became more effective. In the same time, my families also feel so happy.I think if you want to do something. Please keep try it and never give up. Maybe you will get good performance in not long time

Edited version

To say the truth, the sales position is so busy and is under big pressure, especially at the beginning. At first, I didn’t have enough free time to do anything. I just worked everyday, even at weekends and on holidays. So my relatives always grumbled about that to me .
After I worked at there for a while, I got some better opportunities and useful suggestions that helped me become more effective. At the same time I performed better, my family also felt so happy, because I could be with them more.

I think if you want to do something, please keep trying it and never give up. Maybe you will give/make a good performance fast.

at there / to there –> there

several times 好几次，好多次

a while 一段时间

for a while

a man who helped me, a suggestion that helped me

in the same time –> at the same time

keep do –> keep doing

feel / felt / felt